THE STORMING BOHEMIAN PUNKS THE MUSE: the three word line prompt
When I began writing this column, my editor and I discussed various approaches to muse punking. On several occasions, he suggested I explore actual writing exercises. You know, assignments, like they give you in a workshop. Describe the assignment, do it myself, and invite readers to do the same. Do it myself? Practice what I preach? Expose my efforts to the musing public? Sometimes, I think Evan is out of his mind.
I have realized, however, that sooner or later as I ran along I would hit the dreaded writer’s block and have to stretch my muscles to avoid injury.
So, today, we’re jogging around that block with an exercise I learned from the remarkable young poet Stellar Cassidy. It is deceptively simple.
Here’s the prompt: Write a poem for which the given structure is three words per line.
——
Rolling Down Hill
Push past boundaries
Circle the carousel
Gallop through memories
Suburban teenage runaway
rolling down hillside
in anonymous park
cough syrup high
endless cigarette butts
all night walks
donut shop sleeping
afraid to know
i am afraid
can i survive
today I want
to get naked
and be loved
we all want
to get naked
and be loved
who told us
we were ugly
who dares say
our hairy asses
are not beautiful
or the flesh
of our chests
over our hearts
you’ve always wanted
to be touched
i’ve always wanted
to get naked
to get away
to get free
to get whole
to get holy
to get you
to get me
and we all
ride the carousel
and we all
long for love
and we all
fight for freedom
galloping through memories
escaping our pasts
rolling down hills
into our futures
into our deaths
singing our holiness
never giving up
——
Now ask yourself, dear reader: are you feeling lucky, punk?
– Charles Kruger
The Storming Bohemian
I read this post for the first time today as I was heading to Oakland to have lunch with Jack Foley… more on that soon, perhaps, but while I was on BART I thought ‘this would be a great time to do that three word line exercise — let’s see what I can do between 24th and Fruitvale’. Here’s what I came up with (approximate trip time = 35 minutes):
Soul to keep
striving it takes,
let them win
let them take
what they carry
away with their
hands, let them
abolish all value
for the sake
of convenience. Everything
else is uncivilized.
——
Who doesn’t change
when the wind
knocks on home
with a knock
from a treetop?
Any moment can
undo your neuroses
All it takes
the steady patter
something talking, listening
——
accept the cold
terrible fling ending
less than disaster
congratulate the moon
its opacity illuminates
humandust, we answer
the new hello